Review Detail of LiaFeil in Cool Acting System

Alright, Author. Sorry if this sounds harsh or something like that, I used a translator to write this. This is my honest opinion, please accept it calmly. First, I think this story has a plot that is too mainstream and forced. The story moves too fast, making some very clear plot holes. Also, the story is quite predictable. And if I were to grade it, I would give a 6/10 score for your story. But don't worry, I know making a story is difficult so I try my best not to destroy your feelings (?). But, instead, I expect improvements in later chapters and, if possible, improvements in earlier chapters. If not ... well, I'll feel disappointed.