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Comatose: Star Wars Fan Fiction

A small story in the Wolves of the Force timeline during the third year of the Clone Wars. Jedi Padawans Axle Tinguard and Ahsoka Tano crash land after nearly escaping an exploding Separatist flagship. When their escape pod smashes into the surface of an unknown foggy planet, both Padawans suffer serious injuries. On top of their dangerous situations, Axle and Ahsoka also face a new deep connection putting the Jedi code at risk. Now with no way to contact help and their wounds growing even more, Axle and Ahsoka must survive the dangerous planet.

Ax_to_the_max · Book&Literature
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Crash

Axle's POV

"Axle, hurry up. I don't wanna die in a ventilation shaft." Ahsoka whispered behind me. I continued to crawl forward. "Hey you're the one who suggested getting into the vents." I whispered back. She sighed and looked down. It's been a couple hours since we snuck onboard the droid cruiser. Master Windu says that there is critical information that the Separatists stole from us and we must keep them from finding out whatever it is. Ahsoka and I never get the full clues of the missions. All we know is that this information must either be stolen back or destroyed.

Another few minutes past until Ahsoka broke the silence again, "I can't take this anymore. I have to stand. My back is killing me." I nodded. We weren't as small as we used to be so the vents were tight around us. I kicked open the door and we jumped down. Ahsoka took the moment to stretch. I rolled my eyes, "You do know we're still deep in enemy territory right?" She sighed again, "I told you my back was killing me." I turned to face her, but she had her back turned to me as she continued to stretch. My eyes were glued to her bare back. She stretched side to side and her back slowly leaned both ways. She then bent down and her thighs stood out. I couldn't keep my eyes off of them. I shook my head and looked away. What was I thinking? Jedi do not think like that. I never looked at her like that before. What changed? I learned about hormones and other things people are age experience, but the Jedi order told us that everything resembling that was forbidden. She was just so smooth though. Her skirt swayed as she walked towards me, "Everything alright?" My eyes slowly fell to her cleavage. I quickly abort the movement and looked away again, "Nothing. Nothing is wrong. Come on let's get moving."

We rushed through the hallways and took out small droid patrols until we came to the data center. I kicked the door open and jumped inside slicing up the droids with one quick strike. "How are we gonna find the information if we don't even know what it is?" Ahsoka asked. I shrugged, "I have absolutely no idea." All of a sudden the ships started shaking violently. I looked back at Ahsoka, "You see this is why we should have stayed in the vent. The droids we destroyed must have been found and now their scuttling the ship." Ahsoka rolled her eyes, "Ok ok you're right. At least the information will be destroyed. Let's just get out of here."

We ran through the hallways again. The ship felt like a maze. The same color and design every turn. We kept running until we came to the hangar entrance. The door opened and explosions were all that could be seen. Fire charged at us and I quickly ceiled the door shut. "NOT THAT WAY!!!" I yelled and we turned around. "Only one way off this ball of fire. Escape pods." Ahsoka replied. I nodded and we headed to the other side of the ship.

Droids were well aware of our presence and they moved to our position. Ahsoka and I kept battling our way to the escape pods. Droids from all sides just kept coming. When we finally reached the pods, almost every droid was on our tail. I used the force to open the door to one of the pods. We kept running towards it until more droids appeared in front of us. I didn't even think on what I was gonna do next. I pushed Ahsoka into the escape pod as the droids opened fire. It was too late when I ignited my saber. A plasma bolt smack me in the chest. I flinched hard from the pain I tried to recover until another bolt smacked me in the back. I fell to my knees. I felt Ahsoka catch me and drag me into the pod. She laid me on the floor and shut the door. I felt the pod launch. My eyes barely stayed open.

Ahsoka's POV

The Separatist cruiser finally gave way and exploded shaking the pod. I tried to keep the controls straight, but something slammed into the side of the small capsule. Debris from the explosion kepting knocking the pod left and right. I was flung from my seat and crashed into the metal walls. Axle was still awake as he was thrashing about in the chaos.

Axle's POV

I felt the pull of gravity and I looked out the window to see a large planet. I had never seen or heard of there ever being a planet in this sector , but we were hurling straight for it. Another piece of debris slammed into us and the pod was now fully tumbling left and right. Up and down. I smacked into the metal walls and the hard seats screwed to the floor. Ahsoka hit me several times. We were both slamming into everything as the pod kept screaming toward the planet. I felt the entrance of the atmosphere and I could make out flames surrounding the capsule. The pod finally straightened out and pushed me back all the way to the door. Ahsoka crashed into me as the shaking increased. The ground was getting closer. Every time I blink we fell another three hundred feet. "THIS IS GONNA HURT!!! BRACE YOURSELF!!!" I yelled. Ahsoka grabbed onto me tightly and we smashed into the surface. We both went flying forward and smashed into the windows.