Reviews of Chivalry of a failed knight

Its below average for me,if you want a bad ass mc who interferes with canon, dont look here. This is one of those fanfics where they try not to do a disservice to the original mc but end up making the current mc look like a side character. The self insert is strong but original mcs story mostly goes canon. He feels very standoffish and the author mostly writes him into the background. Like a side character who's thoughts we can perceive.

I dropped my 5 star review to 4 because the first 4 to 5 chapters was ok but the Iki become protagonist and there is little new it is basically like the original novel..i don't even know why you write so much about the original protagonist..if this continues i will drop my review to 3 stars..sorry for my bad english,,,,,

The summery is lacking but it is a male MC in the world of..[Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan]...The author has said in his author notes that it will ba a small harem.....Warning the old mc is still in this story so brace your self for a bit of rehash cannon.

You know reading this reminds me of the time my mom caught me masturbating, that feeling of shock and the feeling of being so embarrassed that you feel like your gonna throw up. Not fun at all.

To be honest,I'm actually impress with the shipping with the mc normally many people tend to ship with Stella Vermillion . It's quite rare for writer to make the mc have a romance with kurono so that's why I hope writer keep up the good work and improve your grammar **:Sorry if I offend you if i said to improve your grammar .

I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters --------------------------------------------------

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Not really good with words just wanted to say thanks for the fanfic.

I really wished you hade kept this up it was really good lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

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writing quality is ****..story development is confusing as hell..update stability is meh..close to zero character development..basically the copy-paste of the anime/manga..~~~~~~~~~~~~

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4 stars because there were spelling mistakes, like your 1st chapter's title lol. But it was readable and the flow was smooth.👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍

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