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Bloody Fate Chronicles

In a Galaxy where War rages between planets, where evolution leads to super powers, and where divine beings control fate! How will two young brothers who revere each other more than anyone else survive in this war filled galaxy? Sendou Nakayama- " Why does it feel like fate is real, and if it is how do we reverse it to stop this war." Yaiba Nakayama-"It dose NOT matter, because We will be the strongest and show our enemies just how futile it is to combat our nation" Sendou Nakayama-" Of course, however i still want to get to the bottom of this, because i refuse to be a dog for any nation! * NT: The Mc will be selfish calculative and Very eager to learn of the dao of life, also throughout this novel there will be some dedicated chapters on Mc's brother (Yaiba Nakayama) POV. * Ps: this is my first ever novel, so please provide me with helpful criticism.

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Planet Itha

"Itha is primarily a desert planet that is 3 times the size of earth. Unfortunately however, water only occupies 9% of the planet, leaving many people to die of dehydration every year.

the primary reason why this planet's surface area is so hot is due to the unnaturally strong sun that orbits around Itha. And oddly at the center of the sun there is a small square cube constantly radiating a strange aura. Just what secret resides inside may never be known unless a super with SSS rank heat resi- "

"Boring, when are you gonna get to the juicy parts. Like how the legendary Magician, Jerome Satlehire created water stones so that we can stay hydrated. Or how an A ranked super named Heath created the very telescope so that we could see the center of the sun, and the aura which is probably gonna kill us all in a few hundred years."

This was said by a young man in the back of the classroom of 28 people. He has white hair , ruby red eyes, and stands at an approximate of 5'7. He has an air of arrogance and boldness constantly radiating from his actions. He is very handsome and His name is Yaiba Nakayama, And he is staring very intently at the middle aged woman teaching the history class.

"Well! Since you think you can teach this class better than me, why dont you come on up. Class please give Mr Yaiba a round of applause for his bravery and will to teach."

" *clap* *clap* *clap*"

" *Gulp* Well since you offered i guess i cant decline , although i feel you have been doing a splendid and beautiful job, but i guess thats to be expected from such a beauty as yourself madam Rosalyn"

"Thank you so much for your kind words, however come up and teach please."

Yaiba slowly stood up from his seat and started what looked like a death march to the front of the class. As he stood at the front and was very obviously nervous, he looked to the seat that was beside his and was met with a *thumbs up*.

In that seat was a young man who looked awfully similar to Yaiba and you may have even though of him to be a doppelganger, had it not been for his black hair, and cold expression he was always wearing. His name is Sendou Nakayama. he is a very intelligent person and only has a soft spot for his younger brother. people often wonder what is going on in the heads of these twin brothers because they are the definition of polar opposite.

With Yaiba's new found courage he begins to speak but...

*ring* *ding* *ring*

" Phew, saved by the bell" Yaiba muttered.

"Lucky brat" Rosalyn whispers.

Teacher Rosalyn then immediately goes back to her usual demeanor and starts giving out home work.

" By next week i want a 6 page essay about the history of the world and since Mr Yaiba felt the need to bring it up , i also want the names and biography of at least 5 supers and 5 magicians that have helped with the stabilization of the world" Rosalyn let a smirk reside on her face as she saw the many other students turn there heads and glare at Yaiba.

Yaiba then bolted out of the classroom with seemingly superspeed, and was then followed by Sendou who before his exit Bowed and apologized in his brothers place. Then he simply took his leave and went to his next class, combat training.

...

The same 28 students now stood in a 300 yards length and width courtyard, with a burly man that stood at 6'7 and had a goatee and a bald head that could even put one punch man to shame. In a deep and raspy voice he did his opening speech.

" Welcome everybody today will be a combat competition between each of you. This is the first day of this school year and yall need an alpha obviously. You can call me Professor moon, and there wont be any favoritism so dont even try it. Any questions?"

A lanky and skinny young man at the front figured this was his moment to make a stand. he opened his mouth and before his vocal cords could even begin to vibrate, the teacher shouted:

"GOOD! Now whoever is standing beside you is your sparring partner. Oh yeah and dont lose, or else we will have to find another super, supernatural, magician, etc. to replace ya."

All the student then looked at there opponent, and the Nakayama brothers looked at one another and started chuckling.

"Well big bro i promise i wont take it easy on you but i dont want you pulling your punches either you got it." Yaiba said confidently

" This month i don't think i will stand a chance against you so no need to worry about my 'powers' " Sendou said in a plain tone.

" What, you having that time of month" Yaiba said mockingly

" Its not a period idiot, its my power change"

"I know, i know no need to get you panties in a bunch , hehe"

Professor moon heard the chatter developing amongst the 14 pairs and was noticeably getting irritated. He then cutoff the chatter by continuing to the rules.

" Everyone, will be sparring on this stage"

Professor moon then pressed a out of place small stone on the ground and the invisible fighting stage became visible in front of everyone's eyes. The professor than pulled out a notebook and began to read off the rules word for word.

" The rules are as followed: If your opponent is incapacitated or knocked outside of the ring you win. No cheap shots and no kill shots, if you dont have alot of control over your ability dont use it because you could seriously injure someone. And Blah Blah Blah. Listen up this is your chance to prove your strength and show that you belong, so try your best, and Nakayama brothers since your at the back you can go first."

"Isn't it supposed to be the other way around"

Yaiba shouted

The twins then made their way to the center of the stone martial arts arena that was 1600 square feet. They made eye contact and the perfect picture of two dragons sizing each other up was made.....

Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know so that i can improve and give you an enjoyable experience.

PS:Also i wont be releasing for a bit so that i can stock up on chapters.This chapter was just a teaser.

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