Immanioripse
Not sure if you have already been asked this question, but is this harem? I Am contemplating if i should start investing my time, emotion and money into this novel. In my personal opinion, harem just takes away from character development and the story. i wont mind if he has diffrent partners in his long life as long as one relatinship had to end before starting a new one. A real end. Dont want an ex flame popping up and reigniting past flames.
I can't put this book down and I'm definitely going to end up spending a lot of money unlocking chapters to read it. I'm loving this story line so much. There's a lot of development in almost each chapter. My only negative point is the grammar can use some work but the author is from Italy so it's understandable. There has been a lot of improvement though as the writing continues. Keep up the good work!
Premise is good,sadly it just can't keep up. It's readable, but there are a lot of noticable mistakes. Some really cringy scenes too. Dropped at the part when he gives this speech about wanting to kill his enemies while emmiting "dark aura" and then some bandits attack and he literally said "Ahh, please save me".
Why is this novel not pumping out 20 chapters per week!! I NEED MOREโ๏ธ This novel got everything. Topclass character and story development, massive world with huuuge potential, one of the best writing qualities you can find on webnovel. A little messy in the start, but is getting better and better after chpt 50 ish. Finished this one in 1,5 week maybe, all 600++ chapters. No matter where i went i had to keep reading.
characters motivations seem a little too unrealistic, other then that the story itself is quite good from what ive read. My biggest issue is grammar, having to constantly reread parts of the story just so that it makes sense. Can anyone let me know when its reedited? would love to read a bit more but can't continue reading it atm (read more than 3 chapters)