characters motivations seem a little too unrealistic, other then that the story itself is quite good from what ive read. My biggest issue is grammar, having to constantly reread parts of the story just so that it makes sense. Can anyone let me know when its reedited? would love to read a bit more but can't continue reading it atm (read more than 3 chapters)
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