Reviews of BEWITCH MY HEART: The Naughty Bride

This book is amazing... The leads are amazing.. Never thought a FL to be a military captain.. The FL is a powerful character and ML is also from a doctor's family and powerful character The FL 's personality is really good Loving this book 💜💜💜💜💜💜

I'm on the fence about this novel right now, but it has great potential. 25 chapters in. PROS 1. FL is strong and independent and has characteristics of "reborn FL" without actually being dumb and reincarnated. 2. She's multi talented. Can be classy rich lady, skilled doctor, military captain. Definitely going to see interesting scenarios. 3. ML is in love with her, but we don't know their history yet. He's also powerful in his field and shows signs of being doting hubby (not scummy rapey CEO) CONS 1. FL has her guards UP and this translates to her being an ass to subordinates and ML. She uses people without feeling guilt. I get that it adds to her "strong independent woman" vibe but it's hard to respect and love her. 2. I already see that it's gonna take way too long for ML to get FL to love him. She's a total ice cube. I'm a sucker for sweet romances, not too fond of long chases. 3 (?) FL's entire family is against her at this point. Biological mom who got kicked out of family is ACTUALLY a greedy ass (wow that's new, they're usually framed). The aunts and cousins want to kick her out and play all sorts of tricks. (Con because it's cliche, but if you enjoy then can be a pro) ___ Anyways, if you're into strong characters who just pummel enemies, this is for you! If you like MLxFL cooperation to take down enemies, maybe not. There's not much "rooting" going on. Like when the FL faces injustice and you just wait for the faceslaps. Here, the faceslaps happen before you feel the irritation. Anyways, this is just after 25 chapters. Maybe I'll change my mind later!

Very nice world building and character development. Seems like the ML will have his work cut out for him, it will be a lot of fun to see how things develop! The FL seems really cool, can’t wait to see her in action. There are a lot of minor side characters, hopefully not so many that it gets cluttered as the story keeps going.

This story is very fantastic like the first part "palpate my heart" Hmmm,I think you will be my favourite author. I really like your novels,their plot are amazing and your qrammatic is very good. And leaders(both of them) are very cuteee,especially FL. Just continue,author

I loved it. The fl is smart and witty and she’s in the military instead of an actress like other novels. The ml is in love with her and finally finds her. I totally recommend this novel 💘

Good story line and fulfilling characters building. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘😘😘😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘

Really good romance/action novel! Great characters, exciting action, steamy romance! Already, the FL and ML have a great chemistry, can’t wait to see things develop!

Hello author or anybody where can i read these My heart series. The other book have just five chapters. I tr to find on other platforms but i can’ so please help me

just lovely i just love this story ooh specially baadas female lead and of course sweet male lead oh my god just awesome but where are remain chapters and why are you not updated it author?

Just started this novel and l love it so far! Plot is interesting and intro for the FL was so awesome and fun. Definitely, gave me the giggles, haha. 🙊🙊She’s so playful!!, strong, smart, and witty. I get the feeling that she’s a fighter and will not disappoint in action! I can’t wait to read more about her story and find out about our hot ML...hope he find our FL lead soon!! *___* ♥️♥️♥️