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You should put a meme and parodies tags here!!!!😂😂😂 Anyway.. The idea is pretty good, but, this chapter seems rushed. There are also things that can be fix about the way you narrates this story. I recommend to use third person Point of View when you write more chapters. Well, I can't say much because you only have one chapter for now. I will review again when you have more chapters!! Don't give up!! ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ
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