BaeVida
Cool... Female Lead... Definitely Cool... First of all this is my second or third time reading a female lead.. but now I'm started to think female leads are way cooler.. I don't know maybe it's because I'm bored of reading male lead or something ... in them... everything is like it's obviously going to happen but female leads are like... "hmmmm... cool... kick his a**".... So about this work, it's interesting you have a princess and her family murder case and then [spoiler. Nahh..go read it yourself and find out].. Secondly about the grammatical errors and all... there are but not that many to break your flow of reading...you can enjoy it. Lastly.. it's a good work... everyone should try it... and thanks author for his hard work.
So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough. Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.
I love the way the father-daughter bond was presented in the first chapter, it was really sweet. The Princess is a really strong character physically and emotionally. It's great to see that she has a fun and childish side too! This is truly a deep and fascinating story. Please keep up the brilliant work Author!
The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed. I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself) " On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about. That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!" Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..😂😂 I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!
Hello my lovely readers.... Who missed me?...... Hahahahaha, sorry for the update starvation.... Being busy with other things and I really needed the encouragements from you guys. It help writers to get feedback from their readers. So it would be nice if you guys show support. Well would try and update three chapters this week. Thank you for reading