Reviews of Azazel Against The Gods™
Azazel Against The Gods™
SadisticPrince
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This is my very first novel- brought to life by my friends urging me to create a novel as a result of my role playing tendencies. Naturally, without the credibility and experience to back me up, I can't really give myself a 5 star. Anyhow, I will really appreciate it if you guys give me feedback on my writing and story as whole. With english not being my first language, It will be very helpful for there to be constructive criticism that will hopefully better my writing. Merci.
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this is the stupidest novel I've read, transported in the world of ATG, dashingly handsome and to access his overpowered character the criteria has to be dashingly handsome, oh and hey when they meet Jasmine just tell her everything that the MC came from Earth and why he knows everything about her is because he read some sh*tty novel, that's basically it, the whole plot is so stupid that I'm speechless what to expect from this? have fun inside the novel which you have read? steal all the resources and grow stronger and do some stupid circus dance inside some sh*tty novel from Earth?.
I really hate when the author breaks the law of reality to be more clear I'm talking about( The Law of Reflection, The Law of Equilibrium, The Law of Verification). For example the law of verification, how can he verifies that he exists in reality when proving someone else reality is fiction when he is a fanfiction himself. You're trying to defend that lying to J@smine does not help in the long term when he himself living in a big fat lie, your lie. And By the way, one of the synonyms of fiction is a lie. what I'm saying is you break the immersion of the readers perspective. That why most of us readers drop this novel.
