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I really enjoy reading this novel. The story is really well thought out. Even though it's not finished, the author posts on a pretty consistent basis, so I'm always looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
The story line is a good set up for just two chapters so far! I like the genre of the book and the story board. I know its going to turn out great! Keep on writing I can't wait for the new chapter haha.
The story would be very good if maybe there was a list of names, and background stories to each person. Maybe even a prologue. But other than that you could already tell this is going to be great! I also think a descriptive setting would make a wonderful edition :)