Reviews of ash and dawn
ash and dawn
Jake_Zick
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Turtle_SiyakaLv1Turtle_Siyaka
This story has promise as for being a great tale... needs editing, as I struggled through the first chapter. Grammar needs fixing, when a character speaks, start a new paragraph and be sure to add "quotation marks". Some words needing spelled correctly.
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