Embra
This had me with the whole "god" mc thing. Some random angel throws a system, he picks it up and gives it to lost and found (it's shape of a book), Angel comes and decides to kill him to take it, proceeds to be a Haughty bitch. wouldn't be so bad if the mc wasn't a spinless simpy bitch. Also someone mentioned he becomes an asshole. in the future… Don't read this if: -You hate beta mc -You hate mc with no backbone -System cliché (I guess) -Haughty/Arrogant/Annoying/Princess Complex B*tchy female characters -Stinky Attitudes
Welp. Cant go through this any more. If you are looking for entertainment, dont bother there are a lot of choices this is just frustating. The "heroine" has the cliche chinese novel arrogant and spoilt clan elder granddaughter which for some reason chinese novels really like. Not even tsundere level of annoying, it goes even further beyond. this is the type of people you gotta remove from your life if you know someone like this irl. MC's personality fits more for mini antagonist that only serves as stepping stone for bigger badder enemies. This guy is literally like the follower of the arrogant young master that if appear early enough, can get some chances to bully the true MC a bit, only to be beaten up soon and call upon the young master, that gets beaten up while this guy cheers for the young master by the side and get scolded after the young master got beaten up. The comes senior, then clan elder, then clan patriarch. Hayzz,
The story is really good and detailed, but some parts of the story are dragged out longer than it needs to. For example, like the prolog, the prolog is about 10 chapters each having 1000+ words, some of the prolog characters don't even matter and just an filler that you don't really need to know so you kinda have to gut your way through it. Either than that its good, just some advices though, if you don't have the enough patience then this story is not for you.
I like it quite a lot, the only problems I have with it is the lack of updates and the fact that the disciple will be female. FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER FILLER
It is a great fan fiction, it has good character development and also great story development since the development is slow but constant and no power ups are taken with the nakama power or some similar shit, just like the love development of the character was slow and I don't take women out like Pokémons