Review Detail of Krisavq in Ascension of Lightning God (Dropped)
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The story is really good and detailed, but some parts of the story are dragged out longer than it needs to. For example, like the prolog, the prolog is about 10 chapters each having 1000+ words, some of the prolog characters don't even matter and just an filler that you don't really need to know so you kinda have to gut your way through it. Either than that its good, just some advices though, if you don't have the enough patience then this story is not for you.
Ascension of Lightning God (Dropped)
Embra
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Author here. Yep, I thought about that too and try to shorten them as much as I can but, I wanted to show the readers about how Kenniayi and Sethar become so familiar with Embra and I so, I wrote some long ass chapters. I do not plan to recall their back story in the middle of this real story development. So, I do not shorten the chapters anymore and just leave it be. But your suggestion is good. I think, I will write the shorter version later. Thanks for the advice bro.