Edit ch4

If you are new to this novel you can ignore this chapter if you want

** here is my edit for ch4, please say what you think and any suggestions that you have (it may or may not become official chapter) **

This chapter was one of the confusing chapters I modify it and post it here say your thoughts about it if you think it's good I modify the novel base on this

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Menu

1-Store (unlocked)

2- management ( unlocked)

3-Scanner(unlocked)

4- Quests

5-Storage

6-Mobile functions

I open the store

1.1 functions and upgrade

--> here you can buy new function or upgrade them

--> choose category

I choose management category and on top of the list it highlights survivals camp manager and prices is free so without hesitation I bought it

--> purchase complete!

--> this was how you can buy new functions now go click on upgrade

I do as it says then a new menu open

-->chooes storage for example

I do it and a menu with many upgrades come to my sight

1- add 1 cubic meter to normal storage 10E

2- unlock the cold storage and add 5 cubic meters to it 40 E

3- unlock the zero atmosphere storage and add 5 cubic meters to it 120 E

4- unlock the cleaner storage and add 5 cubic meters to it 240E

5- unlock the network storage and add 5 cubic meters to it 400 E

More ...

1.2 Energy store

-->

1- blueprints

2- medicine

3- food and water (limited )

4- technology

5- training methods

6- book in any area

-and many other thing

be aware that energy units are hard to come by so save them for what you need most

* you can't buy weapons or any war-related items and any sort of material from the store, things in the store have limited supply per day, you can't buy things from the store and become merchant but can share blueprints and manual with others and use them to make weapons or anything you want and you can use items on others (if they are not limited to you mostly you can but sometimes no)*

2.1Database (in here you have all of your scans results, experiment results, events that happened to you, information that you found, and many others...)

2.2 camp manager ( help in managing survival camp)

2.2.1 building (Here you can manage your camp building, ap os will analyse your home base and Suggest possible upgrades, but doing it is your job and you decide what to do, it also make a map for camp or any building related to camp)

2.2.2 camp member profile ( any information system have related to camp members)

2.3 setting ( on or off function and some managing options )

Then I open Scanner

3-Scanner

3.1 status (you can scan yourself with a status command and see the result )

3.2 opponents scan( scanning that shows the power of your opponents or any creatures )

3.3 item scan (what some items are and their use)

* (this function has more use in future if you upgrade it )*

--> status

Name: Jack (---)

Faction: none

Rank: 1

(base on average parameters without evolution=1)

body strength : (1.5)

Reaction :(1.3)

Speed : (1.35)

Intelligent: (1.6)

Mana: 20 point

Evolution: 3-way water control

( first ability: ice control,

Second ability water control,

Third ability: steam control )

--> now for completing the tutorial you reward with 20 E and exchange option in when you using storage, you can use it to exchange monster's core for energy point, remember to buy useful function and upgrade them and always check quest and know that you are a decision maker and ap os a tool that helps you in your path