Pelius_Anar
I very much enjoyed the novel. The hero was on a high level of personality, intelligent, a ruthless killer. Until chapter 21, things began to deteriorate because of the crazy girl who included him in his team. The dialogues between them are trivial, crazy and stupid. Also, his sexual relationship with her is a disgusting thing. His first team was good, obedient and without petty dialogues. Thank you for your effort. What ruined the novel is that crazy girl and the trivial dialogue with her, on the whole, she deserves 5 stars. The chapters were long and good.
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