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Reviews of Another Naruto Fanfic (Just for fun)

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Another Naruto Fanfic (Just for fun)

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Randomguy791
Randomguy791Lv5Randomguy791

plot holes everywhere. some actions and events are not even logically possible. a 1 day old baby already starts killing. WTF?! a baby can't even crawl until after about half a year at the earliest and walking by 1. Even more incomprehensible is the fact that the baby, our MC suddenly knows how to use the transformation jutsu despite having never been taught to control chackra. and somewhere, somehow, our baby mc can run a distance that takes a week of travel in 1 day, fight with ***** thieves, and win. author explains it all as a superpower gained from reincarnating and that his sociopath behavior is from a rough life and suicide... if you can accept this explanation, you might enjoy this novel, if not, walk away because the contents are illogical and it seems the author will continue with that direction.

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LifeIsAboutChoices
LifeIsAboutChoicesLv4LifeIsAboutChoices

Hahaha not a good story, but author seriously done anything he/she wants. And i have to say that I like it. Hahahaha omg. Ignore everything after this sentence. Hahdbfhdrbhfjd Fnfnnf F Fjf Fmjf Fjf Fj Done 400. Ggwp

Voidne
VoidneAuthorVoidne

Hello everyone! Mr.Writer here :P Just telling you guys that if you are reading this fan-fic, please leave comments or reviews, because this is my first time writing fan-fic :D I am more of an Original writer that write with scripts. I put 3 in everything so I don't look like a desperate fk that needs high scores or anything

GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1GrimReeFer

I want to pull my hair out after reading this. .............................................................................................................

t650825t
t650825tLv4t650825t

Goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood

TornHeart
TornHeartLv4TornHeart

Just support the author for updates umu -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-

Seojun_han
Seojun_hanLv3Seojun_han

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mont123
mont123Lv2mont123

perfect_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Mob02
Mob02Lv5Mob02

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daoistlone
daoistloneLv11daoistlone

Well this fan fic is good, very good i mean it. Recomend to read Slow and steady story, not rushing to main event Not many to tell, but yes still very amazing writing novel fanfic to me.. Personal

Mob02
Mob02Lv5Mob02

ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah this is so funny ahhaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah

Sin_of_Wrath
Sin_of_WrathLv11Sin_of_Wrath

Good. ¹111111111 qwerty 34 Wii Wii woo woo woo eyes upkeep ratio so rap ya stop yea stop its sora environmentalism oral tail pea wol yea awk kya