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An Expensive Revenge

WARNING This novel contains 18+ and evolving. Readers please do take care. The works definitely will contain disturbing elements which might include gory, crazy ideology(maybe) or anything. Challengers are welcome. Read fully knowing that. Story Sypnosis: I am Daken. No. I was Daken, a soldier on his prime, but was framed for unknown reason. Was it my love for the kingdom's princess, Shiva Eternia Ethervalen? A soldier with the power rivaling a general tossed away just like that. Fortunately, a voice warned me the attempts of ambushes and an assassination. The voice told me to go into the Accursed forest, Gal A forest.The most dangerous place of all dangerous places ever known. Even getting close 50 meters from the forest was said to bring bad luck. Rumors said that will invite catastrophe. Some said it will erase the closest villages. Some, until the sightseer die. Some, the whole kingdom. Many rumors flying around, shrouding the forest with more mystery and fear. BUT. There is one fact, well known to everyone who knew about this infamous forest. The fact is not about it is or was cursed or anything. The fact is no trespasser ever come back as survivor. All dead, seen or not seen. That fact made it, a treasure forest. Like insects allured by sweet smell, humans allured by the resources and mysteries accumulated by the forest. From unranked directly to A after many adventurers below S rank failed to return. Then directly to SS rank until an S ranker's magic placate which indicating his life became ashes without warning. Greed fired up which then went to play the pride of the strong resulting in the hurt pride felt wrath toward the forest. It was said 7 vice guild masters along with the army of a kingdom tried to explore the forest all vanished just like that after all, except a messenger team consisting 5 S rankers adventurers, entered the forest. From 5 seemed to be wasteful messengers, only 1 survived. A sole survivor who wasn't the strongest of the 5 nor was the weakest. It was said he was the only to focus on escaping with not even the slightest care of the tragedy happening behind him. He was determined to return home to do his last job as a mere messenger to report the tragedy. It was said that kingdom was the strongest of in the history as well as the richest. That had been the story shared from generation to generation, not clear wether it was a legend, a myth or a fairytale. But, one thing for sure. That forest is the place i lost something important as a man.

BoredDao · Fantasy
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16 Chs

WARNING and Review Chapter

DO READ THIS FIRST.

As the chapter title hinted.

This is a chapter made to give the readers, an early heads up and review which is meant for reference to continue reading.

All this to avoid toxicity as much as possible.

These are some points that should be crucial to help you decide either to continue or not.

1. The content

Anything can get inside of the novel, even if disturbing ones. So, if you found hint(s) about them and felt you wouldn't be able to handle it, you are free (recommended) to back down. Challengers are welcome, tread on fully knowing this fact.

This one will definitely contain scene for the cultured ladies and gentlemen and scene that might stir your emotion or something.

2. Readers influence

I will make plot choices post for readers to affect the story to certain extent.

Self made petition to ask the same also possible but, remember! I never promise I would take it into account, and I am not obliged to follow that suggestion down to very details.

3. Correction

Typos and grammar arrangement or maybe idea used could be wrong, so any correction suggestions are welcome.

BUT, once again I might comply or ignore the suggestions.

4. Merit system

I will keep track of things and may release more chapters per month.

Planned release 5 per week (taking break on the weekends. So, use the sign in reward if you using apps to read as a tracker if impatient.)

I promise i will release at least 20 chapters per month (5 chapters x 4 weeks). This is meaning even if I got busy, I will try to dish out the remaining chapters of the 20 I promised within that month.

Of course, I can just give out more chapters but that's my readers reward.

5. Target

I started this one for a contest, and mainly for extra income.

New users, expect to at least spend some fast passes to read.

In case any unfortunate event happened, I will do my best to take the best solution I can at that time.

Here's my sneak peek review.

Story : Revolving around evolution and starting with revenge. There will be hints here and there, so let your imagination go wild. Any genre can get in and leave as I wish. So enjoy.

Language : I will use english (some might say broken english or bad grammar) along with a part of languages I known.

A little spoiler, I will use japan's chan, kun, sama, dono and etc. (For those who might know nothing, those are words which can't be fully translated to language which own nothing of the similar system. Like sama for example, X-sama could be "lord X" but not all would be that. One who loved to watch any Japan related surely understand.)

Grammatically, this point a bit hard to say. I will take it as you understand, I understand then all is well. Go to point 3 for it. It definitely included on point 4 as my gratitude to the kind soul.

in star rate system, the story get my 5 of 5 stars, presentation 5 as well and grammar would be 4 out of 5, as I often lost of the best word even I actually known that word.

Overall, I would rate this Novel of mine 4 out of 5 for many reasons.