The_Grindelwald
GRAMMARLY...... get, there is no excuse for someone to write a story and not use the tools available. You grammar is terrible, it's at a 3rd grade level and I dont care if English is not your native language. You are posting on an English site. You will never make money writing stories with this kind of grammar no matter how good the story is. If readers have spend more time trying to translate your poor english nobody will read it.
Honest to God, I had very little to no expectations for this story when I first started reading it, but damn the characters are growing on me fast. The mature MC is very refreshing and the supporting cast are not stale as cardboard. Unlike a few other Harry Potter fanfics, the story progression is about average, but it adds to the character development so it is rather enjoyable. Thankfully the updates are rather constant, with one per day so far, so you don’t need to wait a lifetime for the chapters. The grammar is meh, but it’s fine and I am not picky. As I speak English as my first language it is easy for me to cover up mistakes automatically, but if English in not your first language and are not fluent, you may have some troubles, but it shouldn’t hamper the story too much. The story is still in the infant stage, so I can’t comment too much on it, but i am confident the author will do us well and create a wonderful fanfic. So give the novel a try, it is definitely one of the best HP fanfics on the website
What can I say, spelling and grammar is bad, relies too much on pre-made world with no added depth or unique characteristic background and characters have little to no depth. Even though I didn’t enjoy this I still wish to encourage the writer to keep practicing hard and work towards weaving the story he desires.💪🏼(fight on!!!)
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when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when when I can read the next chapter. I cannot wait anymore because I am falling in love with this novel for the first sight.