Reviews of Alma

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The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

The start of the novel is nice, every one can relate to a few things written, but it's an unexpected story. I will appreciate author for the long chapters, it will give the reader satisfaction even if you would update one chapter a day. Keep up the good work.

For those who like books based on fantasy or supernatural realm, they definitely should give this a read! I like the detailed elaborations of the worldly background and our main character. The grammar is good as well. Haven't made it really far because of busy routine but will definitely continue it. All in all, good job author ♥️

Heya, it's a good read, the story is good, the characters are good, and the English is good too (at least better then mine) a missing word here and there but nothing to fuss over. I'm glad I picked it up and spend my time reading it. I hope there will be some plot twist down the line though, as it kind of feels that the hints for the plot aren't very subtle. But that might just be my taste! Doesn't make the story worse. All in all, I recommend!

Dear god.... It is nice to finally stumble across a story that actually feels like a decently-written piece of work, rather than the eye-clawingly painful stuff I typically find on here. Fatty's obviously got some skill, and it shows. You can certainly do a lot worse on this site, and I highly recommend giving this one a shot.

Good writing, interesting story. I like it a lot so far, I recommand it to everybody ! The fact that the chapters are long don't leave you with the insatisfying feeling that I usually have with new novels. I think it's a really original work and the author seems good ! Added to library !

Reading this really gives me hope to some degree :D For most of the time I was worried after reading for either the various major problems the writers have in their works or the pity of knowing that the book is too niche to be appreciated on WN even with its good quality. Now I finally encounter something that has originality, quality AND the potential for contract and commercial success (at least on this website), the world seems much brighter XD. It is just a wild guess but I feel like the writer is from an English-speaking country or at least familiar with it in daily life, for the way he organizes words is natural, easy-to-understand and rather colourful, whereas the novel itself is written not in a typical western literature style, but like a Japanese RPG in my opinion--I was constantly reminded of games like Zelda and Final Fantasy series when I read the plots and the way the author presents his world and characters. Not to say he's borrowing stuff from them, of course--the world settings and plots are very original--just a bit similar in styles. The only thing I can ask the writer to do is to further refine his writing style and the presentation of characters and world-setting through practice, though they are not some problems that would sound a alarm and damage my reading experience, simply something that would make an already good piece even better. For example, though I do love the colourful simplicity of writer's language (if you can convey the same thing in a more reader-friendly way, why use those riddles? :p), some usage of language (in my opinion) is a bit too "casual" for literature work, and the author will really need to practice to connect the bits of narratives and the parts about MC's thoughts in a smoother way--right now I always feel a little bit out of the place when the pov switched from "he" to "I" :p Other than these two problems I would say the quality of the book is quite mature, just some more vivid, small details (emotions, facial expressions and gestures) can maybe make the characters more vivid, and try to scatter the info about world settings in a more fragmental fashion throughout the story. The plots are progressing in a very good pace and tbh if it weren't for me being too busy writing my own book I would really just go on and finish it XD. In fact, though I act all cynical and contemptuous to contracted writers in usual occasions, I actually encourage the author to try and win a contract (if it is a good one) with WN after he reaches the 50K-words requirement (if the editor hasn't spotted him yet before that), because the book is both worthy and very easy for the majority to appreciate, so it should be well above the standard of WN contracted works based on my understanding :D Still, should that time comes, the author is welcome to come to me for advise. I've been doing this for years now so I would have a general idea of whether the salary they are proposing is reasonable and the contract terms are good etc.. Best of luck on that, author∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿

Story holds promise and is a fun read so far. It is engaging and the plot is building at a good pace I think he first couple chapters. I look forward to the progression of the story and keep up the good work author. 👍

I don't understand why it is so difficult for authors to write normal synopsis. First of all, the name of the story didn't clarify anything concerning the story, then there is the synopsis that does the same, the author spends more words complaining and explaining his writing style and character design than explaining anything meaningful. Synopsis is meant to be a short description of the content of the book, not a prologue.

Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.

well the story is about a guy who wants the life ON a beach only to find out that life IS a beach (no pun intended) with high tides and low tides. based on what I've read so far, he wants a slow life, goes along with the flow, has the tendency to escape from problems (a relatable problem) and hesitates to make decisions. This gives him a lot of potential to grow and he didn't disappoint. but here's my problem, we rarely see things from other perspectives, so we can't really get a feel of how much he's grown compared to others. so I'll rate it a four out of five for now.

It's a great series and it's gets you hooked up with its interesting background stories. And I am currently confused about like who is "He" referring and also relation between "He" and Lu'um

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I just spent 20€ on 1000 coins to finish it in 2 days. It's a masterpiece, nothing like you've ever read on this site. I absolutely love the character development, how regardless of the novel being already at 199 chapters (as i'm writing this review right now), you can perceive that Reed has still a looong way of psychological development ahead. Only sour note is the update stability, but as the author said, it's impossible to write actually good chapters in just a day. Keep it up Fatty 💪

Honestly im just preemptively giving the novel 5 stars because of how nice the authors note in the synopsis was. By nice I mean that the content was endearing and well written which has given me expectations towards the story written by the author.

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This is a top tier story if I've ever read one. This novel might have some misspellings here and ther but its a good story. And I absolutely love the beginning of each chapter where MC rants to us readers, its a nice touxh. So far so good.

why this novel hasn't taken off is a complete mystery to me, the character design is amazing (no unidimentional personalities), the world background is intricate, the story is full of twists (some times you can get lost, but it's a good thing bc it puts you in the same shoes as the MC) and when you take the pieces that are scrambled in the story and starts to unravel is amazing...

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