The End Temporarily

So, as of like the 50th time, I'm rewriting the entire story, which means everything up until now is getting redone.

Now, that doesn't mean that the entire story is going to be different. Since my writing style has changed since I originally started this, I have just gotten better at writing in general.

I also didn't like how I wrote some parts of the earlier chapters, and I didn't like how in the earlier chapters everything just flew by. I also didn't like how Allen and Emma got together. It just didn't feel right, so imma just redoing that. Among how they meet Jen. I'm also fleshing out Justin as a character since he felt so plain.

Also, Allen's training arc just jumped, and I feel I could have added more to it. And when Emma was at the hotel, I think I could've given her more things to do like she was going to try and escape in a cooler way.

Yknow other than rolling a Nat 20 on a persuasion roll.

Maybe even give more story to the hotel.

Like there is so much I can do better.

Now I am redoing it, but because of how much I am doing, it will take a bit between each chapter. Now, don't worry, it's not like I'm gonna wait to release a new chapter every month. But it will take time. The upside is that each chapter is going to be nice and long except the interludes, which will be short and sweet and a nice side story.

Onto another upside, alongside Allen Bow, I am writing another story, "The Only Hero In A New World" which will have moderately shorter chapters in comparison, but I will release them weekly, and if I do say so it's a fun little premise. It's pretty much an isekai with a level up system, a sassy AI, and it contains mature themes and language.

Now you may question why am I working on 2 stories at the same time, and that's cause I wanna, and you can't stop me.

You can find the new Allen Bow and The Only Hero in a New World through my profile.

As of right now, the prologue of Allen Bow is out, and I'm working on chapter 1 right now, and it's different.

As for The Only Hero In a New World, Chapter 1 has been released for a while now, and I just finished chapter 2 today, and I have it scheduled for next week.

So I'm gonna keep writing and you have a great day.