Reviews of Alchemist System

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His writing is so bad that he doesn’t even put periods or commas it just sucks it’s almost as bad as my writing and I really suck I can barely read through it terrible

Sorry I'm not trying to write a bad review its just that there is a lot you can do to have better writing 1. Check your Spelling 2. Edit and make sure the story is going how you imagined 3. Add depth to the chapter and try to build a good background. (Just constructive criticism) *spoiler* Why would he just leave HIS mom without saying any thig

It's a very good story with intresting and fresh prospect the author really did a good job with this one this one here hopes that the author would keep this story going for it really is intresting

Unreadable.. Please don't capitalize the first letter of every word. Not even gonna bother to read this. I am sure the story might be a good one or have many good points but I can't bring myself to read it, I'm sorry. Maybe in the future if you change your writing style to something readable.