For those of you that are new, I advise you not to read the original, of you don't want spoilers, um..I should have said this at the start, and the grammar is kind of worse, but meh, anyway um I might have another chapter up today if not I will post one tommarrow.
I will try to have the mc react better and introduce the major characters better as well.
Thanks for reading my book! Its baconater time! guy out!