Reviews of A Witcher Tale: Ron Aydesson

Nice story, I hope, author wouldn’t throw it, and we will read this interesting fanfic for a long time)))))) and I hope, it wouldn’t be a harem. .....................................................................................

i would raise my opinion of the book if you used the word "he" or "she" correctly from chapter 1. i like the idea of the book and can think of possible things that would make it interesting however your writing needs to improve.

i usually don't mind some grammar mistakes, as long as i can understand the story. but your mistakes, while small but it's usually at crucial points, so it becomes confusing.

Plot: Ok so Story is interesting it's a Witcher Verse fic but MCs a Sorcerer so that's new never seen it done before. Timeline: I'm honestly of the idea that Yennefer or even Geralt haven't been born yet. Grammar: that's where it hurts Author is not a native English speaker so it's very annoying to read when MC is called She/Her/Sorcereress/ When he is a Male that's pretty much all I can really comment on since there's not many chapters.

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Needs a serious editing, the grammatical errors make it difficult to read unfortunately.

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I’m exited about this story. I hope you continue to do this well.

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