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Review Detail of Ballad in A Witcher Tale: Ron Aydesson

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Plot: Ok so Story is interesting it's a Witcher Verse fic but MCs a Sorcerer so that's new never seen it done before. Timeline: I'm honestly of the idea that Yennefer or even Geralt haven't been born yet. Grammar: that's where it hurts Author is not a native English speaker so it's very annoying to read when MC is called She/Her/Sorcereress/ When he is a Male that's pretty much all I can really comment on since there's not many chapters.

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A Witcher Tale: Ron Aydesson

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Aydehan
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Thx for review, ı know my grammar is very bad. I will try to fix it in time.

Ballad
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the grammar itself isn't bad it's the little things really so keep at it

Aydehan:Thx for review, ı know my grammar is very bad. I will try to fix it in time.