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Reviews of A Maiden's Frozen Heart

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A Maiden's Frozen Heart

Vera_Anne_Wolf

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Lollipop_Rogue
Lollipop_RogueLv2Lollipop_Rogue

I'm your 10th review! Yay! First of all your story is fantastic! I am so invested in Carina/Maura's future. How is she going to get away from her family? What is the deal with Lord Percy? Is he a good guy or a bad guy? So many questions and reasons to come back for more so looking forward to your next update!

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Bella_Morte_3403
Bella_Morte_3403Lv2Bella_Morte_3403

This story has original characters, an original twist on "another world" transmigration, an exciting plot development that keeps you on the edge of your seat, great dialogue, awesome descriptions, and really just grips the reader from the very first page! I hope the writer will continue to update more chapters! I am looking forward to more of Maura's story!

cheesewheeze
cheesewheezeLv3cheesewheeze

I'm giving this 5 stars. This book is well written, and the flow and world development are detailed. I absolutely love it. I'm adding this to my library so that I can get notified of the future chapters. I highly recommend this to everyone who also loves bad-ass characters. The author is an amazing writer! I'll be waiting for the next updates.

Lazy_leon
Lazy_leonLv13Lazy_leon

Overall writing and world building is excellent! The author is way good with his words almost as if he is real professional! Keep up the good work! 5stars

Ooukination
OoukinationLv1Ooukination

I love it! The flow of the story makes it easier for me to read on phone, and you provided sufficient world background for me to understand. First webnovel to be added to my collection ehe

yiyuehua
yiyuehuaLv2yiyuehua

Genuine review swap: I'm honestly in love with your descriptions. The beginning hooked me instantly. You captured the foreboding mood of your story perfectly with the dialogue. It's easily digestible and it really flows. An honest 5.0 from me. Really looking forward to how the events will unfold!

MikXL_23
MikXL_23Lv4MikXL_23

Hah... Being honest, I can only say... It's unexpected. I can't deny I've had some "apprehension" due to the female protagonist and LGBT tag but man. This is legit one of the best stories I've saw on webnovel, the grammar barely has any errors and the writing quality is inpeccable, can't deny that seeing the huge gap between our writing has broadned my horizons (and kicked my self confidence in the balls). Also, it was pretty clever of that time-skip after her reincarnation since you wouldn't need to write her adaptation on this new world. Honestly, I was planning to drop the story after the review but I decided to stick with it despite its theme that I'm not fond off. Good joob! The only nitpicking of mine is the lack of description of certain characters

Sapphire_Foxy
Sapphire_FoxyLv2Sapphire_Foxy

I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes. The characters were interesting and entertaining. The plot starts off quickly but the writer does fill you in on what you need to know within the first few chapters. I like that some things are kept a mystery, but not at the expense of the plot. Adding to my collection to keep up with the updates. The author seems to update daily and sometimes more than once! Keep up the good work!

Vespera_Shadow
Vespera_ShadowLv2Vespera_Shadow

This story has a lot of potential and its refreshing to see a fresh twist on the whole transmigration into another world. It has assassins, the MC literally puts a hit on a prince in the first couple of chapters. It has magic which we see bit by bit though I'm sure we've yet to see Maura's full magical powers. It has SO MUCH DRAMA you can literally sick your teeth into it. The dialogue and descriptions make me feel like I'm in the story with the MC. Sometimes I even forget that I'm reading the story and that's when you know you've found something amazing! Great work Author!

Morenikejitemi
MorenikejitemiLv3Morenikejitemi

The story is very interesting, I really love the way the characters are described and the plotting is pretty unique, keep up the good job author.

Jay_y
Jay_yLv2Jay_y

This book really catches my interest. I like the flow of the story and the way you used all of those descriptive words. Keep up the good work 👍

Senzai
SenzaiLv2Senzai

The synopsis is interesting, you can really catch up with the plot just with that. I was intrigued by the first chapter, you can really feel the emotions that the author wants you to feel, whether be it suspense or even criticizing its characters. I also like the way how the author transitions. There is just one thing that I am a bit bothered, although it's only on a personal level. The author's use of em dash (—) is a bit abused, maybe lessen the frequency on each chapter and make it a minimum of 1 em dash if you're going to use it on a line. I don't know if it's simply just the writing style of the author but it's just my suggestion anyway. Overall, the novel has visible potential, I'm wishing you good luck on this and keep on having fun writing it.

NotUse
NotUseLv4NotUse

The book is well-written with the use of attention-grabbing descriptive words. I am not good with grammar, therefore I am uncertain if this book has any typos and errors. For the spelling, however, I have not seen any misspelled words. I assume that the author updates daily, so I will rate the stability of updates with five stars. The descriptions are vivid and unique especially when describing each scenario. I have nothing to complain about when it comes to character development and world background. The characteristics of both the characters and the setting were able to grab my attention. As for the story development, there are currently six chapters so I can't decide if the story has a fast or slow pace. Still, I'll be giving this category five stars. Overall: This story is amazing and attention-grabbing. I highly recommend this novel to everyone who is obsessed with the fantasy genre. Keep up the good work author!