Review Detail of Senzai in A Maiden's Frozen Heart

The synopsis is interesting, you can really catch up with the plot just with that. I was intrigued by the first chapter, you can really feel the emotions that the author wants you to feel, whether be it suspense or even criticizing its characters. I also like the way how the author transitions. There is just one thing that I am a bit bothered, although it's only on a personal level. The author's use of em dash (—) is a bit abused, maybe lessen the frequency on each chapter and make it a minimum of 1 em dash if you're going to use it on a line. I don't know if it's simply just the writing style of the author but it's just my suggestion anyway. Overall, the novel has visible potential, I'm wishing you good luck on this and keep on having fun writing it.