I'm Cole Lawson, The Imperium better get ready to know this name!
Fantastic story. The Army hive mind is especially amazing and very well thought out, well planned, and scalable in theory. Given enough time, resources, and knowledge, they could become unstoppable and potentially control entire star systems. However, the Warp and Chaos are difficult to predict, which makes such expansion far from guaranteed
Good wh40k story with an army style system. Mc has a past which is not expanded upon but is of not much relevance other that backdrop. Progression is adequate and proper up till the latest chapter. Good job tl. And the raw is almost of the same name, except this tl is upto date with the raw it seems