Naruto: Sharingan Skill Extraction Technique

Spelling is Okay, not too many wrongs. I think this is old novel because it said Tahm Kench is not released by the time MC transmigrated. This novel has potential in top rankings. but looking at now it's look like chapters is 50–70 only and please Translator san what is RAW name? Thanks For Translation [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Please fix the names to fit the setting, and please for love of all that is and isn’t, use “ “ when people are speaking, it’s hard as hell to tell the different between talking and narrating without it. This is goo book, idea good, but two main issues are what stops this form being a excellent one, and they are editing (not just saying you will and then not do it) both names of some characters (Chinese names, heck mc’s fit the story but instead it’s his sister that doesnt), and major issue, to point if this is fixed then I can overlook the name issue a bit (via shutting brain off), USE PROPER PRONUNCIATION AND “ “!!! Literally, that’s honestly the main issue. And while it may be seen as criticism, it’s actually me trying to help you. Use proper punctuation (and grammar when can) but especially, most importantly! Punctuation! That alone at least makes the difference between good books and books with potential that are ruined. Please author, make this one single type of edit at least, I wanna keep reading this, as it’s very good, but I can’t when it confused me and makes me feel like it’s a chore to just figure out where people start talking and stop talking…

Honestly, the story is utter shit, it's not even surprising that few people want to read it. The story deserves 1 star, and I will add 3 more stars for the efforts of the author (translator) that, despite the fact that the story is not popular, it was not abandoned.