In Marvel With Unique Skill Great Sage (MCU)

I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.

Pure stupidity by furry femboi mc/author...first despite having great sage he wants some fkin stupid armour of tony knowing how strong rimuru gets in future making armour even greater what tony can imagine would be a child's play for mc but nah this mf author wants to make mc a femboi and a ret@rd...

The story makes no sense, first of all why the f is the mc so horny to get / steal tonys money and arc in the early chaps if and i mean if u have Rimurus Whole Abilitys. This seems bland and dumb. if u have nothig to read then this is the shit

Looks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then

MC lands in marvel right next to tony in the desert after escaping capture. MC immediately thinks of killing tony and taking the arc reactor for no reason other think hes an idoit.... whats he gonna do its not even the upgraded arc reactor. Is he gonna build a suit. power a vacum. MORON!!

Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage

story starts right Tony's cave in Afghanistan now major cons of this novel is -character is too stupid , his first thought after seeing tony is to kill him and steal arc reactor, and his character doesnt really develop better. -story's translation is weak all chinesium element are not removed like, mc being part Chinese, their weird nick names for marvel characters , and weird morals also we shouldnt forget subtle racism, sexism and sometimes blatant. and also their monologues abt some well established plot points and philosophy + justification of mc actions like why he did that, then adding some chinese saying etc... -MAJOR LETDOWN: was stories premise is that mc hold one of the overpowered and most versatile ability in all fiction, with ability to calculation ,learning, understanding pretty much super ability but this story starts with this idiot thinking of killing tony to get premature arc reactor. and i don't spoil anyone but his decisions and character doesn't really change much - above are not even abt plot ,pace or writing quality so this point is for that : they are ok but pace is worse ,story usual web novel type

Bad mc, dumb and soulless.

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I liked it at first, after the mc started wanting to crossdress I stopped liking it, when the love interest was an oc I was even more disappointed, I don't know why the mc stays with Tony, he looks like someone who doesn't know what do, I have a feeling the story isn't going anywhere and the MC will always stick with Tony.

The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.

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it's intriguing, but I don't like how you feminize a male and most who try and base their characters off of rimaru do so with a few exemptions that aside you are down playing the combo of gs and pred by going the tech rout I mean seriously ik the story just started and all but that's a red flag but that's just my opinion I'll see what you do with this

loving it so far, pls gib more and dont drop

1 mc is same if not worse than rimuru, acts as a trap, likes to cross dress etc - one can have mc based on rimuru but as even the og rimuru can take the manly form , a ff mc can definitely look too. 2 mc is dumb as f - well a lot of other reviews have covered why and how for this. 3 even cheat is not used properly and only goes to tech route - example predator (absorb the spiders in oscorp, hulks,inhumans, aliens) 4 as this is a chinese FF a lot of the usual poison is in it all an all a dumb waste of time novel to translate.

3.2 bcs chapter word count is short compared to the no of chapters. and bcs of that it's extremely slow pacing . I mean you just lengthen the story of 5 chap with good word count into 29 chapters with low word count. I am thankful for your work though but I need to tell you this critique.

A masterpiece, I highly recommend reading for those who are fans of tensura and Marvel. 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛

El personaje principal es de mentalidad cuestionable. Se puede asumir que es parte de la generación del 2000 y tiende a tener pensamientos intrusivos homicidas como esos que uno puede tener cuando sostiene un bebé. Por lo demás va bien, aunque extraño ya que "great Sage" es más capaz que una computadora cuántica lo que debería hacerlo aterradoramente rápido. En cuanto al personaje voy a asumir que "great Sage" lo está ayudando a manejar el viaje y proceso. De momento no se puede agregar nada mas

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the concept of bringing rimuru into marvel is not new, but fanfics about it are either too few or disappointing, so finding one that holds up is refreshing. keep it up.Frankly I feel threatened, the author is very good at negotiating, very good story