Item: In Marvel With Unique Skill Great Sage (MCU)
Rating: 3.2
Author: OVERPOWERED

OVERPOWEREDLv121d

2024-12-28 03:18

3.2 bcs chapter word count is short compared to the no of chapters. and bcs of that it's extremely slow pacing . I mean you just lengthen the story of 5 chap with good word count into 29 chapters with low word count. I am thankful for your work though but I need to tell you this critique.

In Marvel With Unique Skill Great Sage (MCU)

Kazuma_trash

4.4

31 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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OVERPOWEREDLv12

and please don't ask for a 5 star review for the new chapter you can just ask for the number of reviews or their real opinion .

Other Reviews

Z3RG102077Lv6

I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.

NunuXDLv12

Looks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then

BloodMonkLv12

Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage

RequienLv15

The story makes no sense, first of all why the f is the mc so horny to get / steal tonys money and arc in the early chaps if and i mean if u have Rimurus Whole Abilitys. This seems bland and dumb. if u have nothig to read then this is the shit

BigPanda69Lv2

Pure stupidity by furry femboi mc/author...first despite having great sage he wants some fkin stupid armour of tony knowing how strong rimuru gets in future making armour even greater what tony can imagine would be a child's play for mc but nah this mf author wants to make mc a femboi and a ret@rd...

Prakash_Das_7278Lv13

this is a really really good story so far .....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LastGodLv4

MC lands in marvel right next to tony in the desert after escaping capture. MC immediately thinks of killing tony and taking the arc reactor for no reason other think hes an idoit.... whats he gonna do its not even the upgraded arc reactor. Is he gonna build a suit. power a vacum. MORON!!

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The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.

Martian_FridgeLv4

loving it so far, pls gib more and dont drop

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