Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy...... C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden
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love the story so far a little slow, but that is OK only problem is the jetsu names in Japanese. make them in English so I know witch jetsu is it
Very interesting, great desition to not place the MC in the Konoha.
An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.
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please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential
it has for sure potential but lets see in the future
Why not nove this to fanfiction? Also good fic.
W fucking fic, i like the pacing and th character development, even though yu somtimes get the grammer wrong, its only basic, it doesent affect the reading experience alot.
This is a good fic in the hidden mist. The Mc is a few years younger than Kakashi. Smart Mc who's not edgy and cares about people. Give it a try
Really good, I liked the beginning. Can't wait for more chapters! . . .
