Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy...... C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden
An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.
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Perfecta en todo... tanto el transcurrir del tiempo, como el desarrollo del MC y los demás personajes... bastante detallado en cuanto a sentimientos, y da la impresión de que recién comienza la historia, no se adelanta mucho en el tiempo...cinseramente me encanta...[img=Mad]
So far so good, I'm really enjoying the story. It's a bit slow but at a healthy and fun pace, and it's rare to see a story like this that also shows a bit of the characters' slice of life.
Great story so far, excited to see where it goes. It offers a fresher approach to a Naruto Fan-Fiction by taking place a bit disconnected from the main story in both location and age. Some critiques would be the flipping of gender pronouns for certain characters in the beginning which can be a bit disorientating and the pacing can seem a bit on the slower side without a sense of direction for a bit. Praises would be the focus on building the main characters emotions and fleshing out the supporting cast for him. Recommendations for the author would be to draw inspiration from the original source material through side-films and filler episodes, rereview some of the earlier chapter to correct grammar and pronoun mistakes.
W fucking fic, i like the pacing and th character development, even though yu somtimes get the grammer wrong, its only basic, it doesent affect the reading experience alot.
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I read the story in one go. Excellent work. Will eagerly wait for the sequel
A very different approach from most Naruto fanfics, instead of following the standard and more comfortable path with the Konoha setting, the author was more innovative and decided on Kirigakure. And so far I say it's one of the best fanfics of the genre I've read, Unlike most, the choice for slow progression is very well used to introduce us to the world and focus on the characters so that we can care about them. Because of this point, every event that involves them is truly significant to us. So I highly recommend this story if you want to read about a living world where the characters don't revolve around the protagonist, where events have weight and leave you with an eagerness for what the future has in store for our little Ren, start reading now!
I would of gave this a 5 star but there are some problems like for example the misgendering of characters he/her also him/his when you mentioning a girl and characters description, like when you introduced a character it would be nice to describe how they look example hair color and so on and the mentioning of jutsu like“henge no jutsu” add a little description next to it (transformation jutsu) and for the same thing for the villages konohagure add (hidden leaf) that would be nice if you can fix these issues I read up to 24 chapters so idk if you fixed these issues in the later chapters but it should be nice to fix these issues in the older chapters too
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love the story so far a little slow, but that is OK only problem is the jetsu names in Japanese. make them in English so I know witch jetsu is it
Very interesting, great desition to not place the MC in the Konoha.
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please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential
it has for sure potential but lets see in the future
Why not nove this to fanfiction? Also good fic.
