Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy...... C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden

An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.

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Perfecta en todo... tanto el transcurrir del tiempo, como el desarrollo del MC y los demás personajes... bastante detallado en cuanto a sentimientos, y da la impresión de que recién comienza la historia, no se adelanta mucho en el tiempo...cinseramente me encanta...[img=Mad]

So far so good, I'm really enjoying the story. It's a bit slow but at a healthy and fun pace, and it's rare to see a story like this that also shows a bit of the characters' slice of life.

Great story so far, excited to see where it goes. It offers a fresher approach to a Naruto Fan-Fiction by taking place a bit disconnected from the main story in both location and age. Some critiques would be the flipping of gender pronouns for certain characters in the beginning which can be a bit disorientating and the pacing can seem a bit on the slower side without a sense of direction for a bit. Praises would be the focus on building the main characters emotions and fleshing out the supporting cast for him. Recommendations for the author would be to draw inspiration from the original source material through side-films and filler episodes, rereview some of the earlier chapter to correct grammar and pronoun mistakes.

W fucking fic, i like the pacing and th character development, even though yu somtimes get the grammer wrong, its only basic, it doesent affect the reading experience alot.

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I read the story in one go. Excellent work. Will eagerly wait for the sequel