The Dark Rebirth of Pandora: Revenge of the Abyss

This book is literally my dream book, the book I would write myself if I wasn't so lazy. It has properly confident evil mc, who is yandere with almost no morals.

one of my dream books that I always wanted to read. the plot seems interesting and is really detailed too, also main character is a type that I rarely see (a character that truly is a monster that follows their own instinct instead of staying with human morality but monster body) the only problem is while reading I saw some word errors like missing sentence or a wrong usage of words English is not my first language so I may be wrong on that.. overall it's really good story but not for soft stomach imo.

although the work has sensitive themes, it is very good, it has an interesting plot, and it has a lot of potential if the Author doesn't get lost along the way.

eu conectei minha conta só para comentar. a historia é muito boa. gosto de como tem capitulo todos os dias. o enredo e bom e mesmo com o prazo todos capitulos são criativos, os personagens são bem unicos cada um é diferente do outro mostrando diversidade, alem da hiatoria de fundo que e muito bem estruturada ate agora nunca encontrei um buraco na trama. embora tenha alguns pontos que parecam buraco foram explicados em capitulos futuros de forma bem detalhada. gosto do grau de violencia e sexualidade nos capitulos que tem. e por fim acho que tenho grande animação em dizer Que Pandora é um pronagonista bem interessante,embora os primeiros 4 capitulos comecem bem cliche depois muda totalmente se tornando unico, a Pandora e o tipo de protagonista que muitos procuram e é super raro aparecer,uma protagonista com o toque certo de obcessão e loucura, que é sanguinaria e fofa, que é esperta mais nada em nivel absurdo para deixar tudo facil, alem de ser uma obra onde ela realmente vai crescendo aos poucos ao inves de ter o poder de mão beijada. adoraria se tivesse tradução para PT Br

Self-Assessment of My Work I’ve just realized that I can do a self-assessment, so here’s my take on my work so far. I think it’s turned out pretty well. The premise is interesting, and I’ve worked hard to make the characters stand out as unique individuals, rather than just background NPCs. I try to give each character their own distinct personality to make them memorable. There are a lot of details in the story, but I try to balance them with the pacing so it doesn’t overwhelm the reader. Even though the themes can be heavy at times, the reading experience flows well and isn’t too hard to follow. Of course, there might be the occasional small writing mistake here and there. I’m not a native English speaker, but I always do my best to correct any errors I find. I’m always open to questions and suggestions. However, I can’t guarantee I’ll add every suggestion, as I only make changes that fit with the direction I’ve already planned for the story. Overall, I’m happy with what I’ve created. I think it has a lot of potential, and I’d definitely recommend giving it a chance.

Very good recommend, the story is very well structured, and the characters have unique personalities is approved (W0W))(8-8)([#0=--=0#])(*'U'*)

the author of this novel really knows what they are doing. keep up the good work👍

It's pretty early to leave a review, but considering the author's other work and reading what i have till now i can confidently say this is worth your time, give it a read if you can.

This work is DIVINE, it is possibly one of the best works on the subject, She is Dark and delivers on that, something I like is that the author does not forget things, there are things that appeared in a chapter and later on they prove to be useful or complement another explanation, simply an incredible work!

this book is absolute peak, from the characters to the story it is perfect. the only downside is due to how realistic it is, the complexity can be difficult to follow especially if you want to be emersed in the book but otherwise it is perfect. author I applaud you ❤️❤️

i am really enjoying this story , so far story is good and enjoyable...I like yandera type but she is too extreme, well not that i hate it but prefer if her yandera mode is bit lower this story has good lore,good power level system and the elements, fighting techniques, meterials ..... all are very detailed and the characters are good also i wouldv've prefer if her revenge part is just a small part of the story I mean the revenge with her/ his classmate..since there are gods and primordial existence and the some of elements mentioned are all planetary + powers like void,chaos, time.... so hope this story goes beyond planet + level and with heros level limit their raw strength only goes continent level unless with good hax they go beyond continent level also i heard there will be Bl, well since now that he became she..it will be technically considered straight although it still bit strange since he was a male before well whatever since from reader perspective it's still between man and women so I'm alright with that part and you already has explained the reason for it anyway well that's it my review,I'm really hyped since this story has majority of the thing I liked :)

after reading it for 3 months I can confidently say that this series is one of my favorites... tho it's still not for soft stomach it's really epic and unique imo, don't get dissapointed from first few chapters. at least read the unlocked chapters before rating honestly :) I hope it's gets more hype.