Okay this is an actual review,, Kira/Mc is an knock off isagi with better dribbling and shooting.( Author doesn't describe his moves he'll say. "Kira shot was perfect and went corner" or dribbled smoothly, Theres no telling or unique to him. He helps everyone in blue lock/In His wing like isagi and raichi. Author its blue lock give him his own personality he always trying to improve them. *(And through out the whole story he had not improved or got better Nothing for the whole story*)
AND Then on the field he trys writting him all hard and try to make him feel less friendly making orders but then off he always helping and has no backbone to say no... Im done reading this and hope this will tell what you wanted to know about the fic.
Story development slow as he build raichi his own background and to make him improve better *His favorite character which is fine but don't be changing the story or fic because of that*.
(To learn more on blue lock writting would say read God of Blue lock and other fics just to learn how they write it and take notes as your mc has nothing fancy or cool to even keep him in blue lock.)
