The Astral System

Shamless author here, please give my novel a try, the beginning I'd decent but I assure you it gets better. thank you

You ever wanted to experience what it feels like to be an overworked Japanese Salary Man that regularly sleeps on the train with his tailored suit and pack of half empty cigarettes due to his corrupt company forcing him to work over 60 hour weeks? Then I think this is the book for you! Boy when I tell you I had seen my wife and kids for a total of two hours in the past three and a half months since reading this book, you better believe it! (I imagined my entire family) Anyway Aiden is a representation of what the author thinks he is and Mark is a representation of what he is missing from his loved ones.

the world needs more building but overall solid novel the author is my friend so I love supporting him

although i haven't been consistent but this book as always drawn me to webnovel i just like the promise and the ease at which the writer explains the events . it makes fantasy real in a way I can't describe. keep it going

REAL SHAMLESS AUTHOR HERE, I DIDNT EXPECT SOMEONE TO BE MORE SHAMELESS THAN ME AND WRITE A REVIEW BEFORE ME. give my other novels a try and please let me know in the comments and review sections. like mo_242 here.

This is a hidden gym, very captivating novel that offers a unique blend of adventure and deep emotional resonance with other characters. Set in a sad tone at the beginning, the story pulls you in with its world-building and keeps you engaged with characters who feel like real people, complete with their own struggles and growth. What truly sets this novel apart is how it resonates on a deeper level, exploring themes of self-discovery and belonging in a way that stays with you long after.

The novel starts of decent, however after chapter 14 the novel peaks, the author’s improvement becomes very visible and the story novel becomes top tier.

The first novel im going to read, so im going to give it 5 stars. because the first is always special (: you know what im saying. anyway, ima make another review later when i read the chapters. see ya.

Amazing novel with rich development stage. Came from ur other novel Ascendant system. I must say you are improving rapidly keep it up author.

So far its been amazing, the story is well thought and the start is not boring. and characters have their own personality. the way the mc gains power is also understandable as he works hard to gain more.

The main character is a fool he's so stupid they should delete him and rewrite his personality