Item: The Astral System
Rating: 5
Author: NotIkhwani

NotIkhwaniLv19mth

2024-07-20 04:17

The first novel im going to read, so im going to give it 5 stars. because the first is always special (: you know what im saying. anyway, ima make another review later when i read the chapters. see ya.

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