Marvel/Xmen:Yuta Okkotsu

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The main character is too dumb ...................................................................................................................

Lost interest when mc power is copied……..

Threw it in the trash when the Rogue copied the main character's improved ability to copy abilities and also received all his powers and cursed energy

This feels more like a draft that need to be fleshed out more than a end product chapter, but good idea. This is all my own opinion to take this advice however you want.

Dropped after Rogue got all of the MC’s power.

Honestly Dropped the moment Rouge copied all of the MC powers and even got access to his cursed energy which comes from his own dimension ( like Durmamu ) and got access to his Libary which comes exclusively from the system

É apenas um MC invencível esperar o que disso? ---------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------

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The protagonist is too op.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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It was doing soo well.. Then the mc became Too predictable and greedy. You copied JEEAAAANNNN!!!!!!! I mean Jean's power. You could have, I don't know use telekinesis to get the blood samples instead of attacking the Previously-men during the Sentinel invasion. B-b-but anon he hasn't trained using telekinesis yet. then git good. Also Rouge getting a Copy of MC's power then begins to explain all of the current powers of the MC was the last nail to the coffin and it's only been 6 chapters in

Dropped when Rogue got all MC's powers what a shame it had a good start ............................................................... ...............................................................

So guy gets titans power, then gets taken to X mention, steals powers, he thinks he’s the best then the sentinels stack he copy’s cyclops powers then goes for rogue but “mistakenly gets toughed” by her so he has all his powers to his mastery and will be able to go to the curse dimension soon, i don’t like this manly cuz now there’s not much going for him, and now all the X men are after him probably cuz he lied to them even tho he saved them?

[translated by Google] I like the concept, but please for those who read this and are writers, stop making the 10k word chapter, you ruin the reading experience, when you go to read in the classification section you expect the fanfic to have a moderate amount of chapters, I only give 5 stars because I like the idea

Good idea and concept but too few chapters to tell but here’s my obligatory 5 stars for promising novels

the idea is good, but as other people have written, you need to differentiate the writing a little chili 'for conversations" and also 'for thoughts" good luck :)

I like this it has good potential

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