The writing is good and some-what bad in that the author tends to only write the "action" scenes and everything else is just summarized with internal monologue. So it's a 3-4 out of 5, the Grammer is OK though as in I haven't seen any egregious misspellings. The thing with the Quotations is bothering me though. I'm only surface level on Marvel lore in that I have seen the MCU movies and the older pre-MCU, Foxes X-men and Raimis Spider-man. So nothing from me on that front. JJK on the other hand I know about, so Yuta not having Rika at first is abit weird, Rika is bound to Yuta. Also Sukunas CT is not called "Cleave & Dismantle" it's called "Shrine" C&D are a small part of it. As of chapter 2 he should know RCT because of Rika. The Cursed Dimension is a good way to include Curses and Cursed energy into Marvel though so props to that. Despite the criticisms I look forward to more, take it with a grain of salt P.S. I want more of a Despresso-Espresso MC because y'know Yuta a depressed boi.
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My bro here mentioned everything i wanted to say. I'll keep an eye on this fic for it the author do the editing stuff to touch all the problems written. And if not than it's tata bye bye for me. Because I don't like those inner monologue novels because it doesn't have that living feel to it.
