When the plot-skips players into the game world

I wasn't sure where the story was going within the first couple of chapters, however as I kept reading it just got better and better. The grammar was good, and the magic system was well structured and reminded me a little of lord of the mysteries but with a little bit more of a game feel.

I like the story and how he has to scheme and plan to live/ progress, but it did have one fundamental flaw: for someone who skips the plot, he knows pretty much every detail that has mattered. I still think it is a good story, and a lot is happening at a good pace, but by doing it this way, it is straying away from the fundamental point of the book that it is even named after

The world background is not yet clear , but the story is going pretty smooth . l like this new type of power system . It's different from the norm .