Comments of chapter undefined of American TV Shows & Movies: Reincarnated as a Girl.

American TV Shows & Movies: Reincarnated as a Girl.

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dexartiLv5dexarti

when you tell the story of an event from the point of view of different characters I noticed that there are small discrepancies, I advise you to write the detailed timeline and then describe it from the point of view of the characters thank's for your job

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javi299Lv11javi299

Did you totally forget about Vivian? Although I suppose she died in the explosion, I don't know why knock her out instead of killing her and then let her die in the explosion. And I think you should change what happened 2 episodes ago when Katie told Ava what happened at Helen house before she arrived, because she mentioned that a wounded woman and another woman with a gun entered the house, but Katie not mention the 2 men who entered the house, if Ava had had to enter they would be 2 surprise enemies that Katie do not mention.

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