The story is technically good, but in the world of Solo Leveling, you have to follow around a kid in highschool, yeah... Dealing with highschool drama and relationships, as well as going to school everyday, despite having Jin Woo abilities, as well being extremely naive and revealing the system to a friend he barely met for a day, for nothing, just to heal his leg. The writing and everything else is good, just his interpretation of Hachiman is just not there and irks me, it was as if all of his trauma and nihilism before got solved after getting into a coma. If you like highschool drama things in Solo Leveling with naive MC, then this story, despite how I make it sound, is really decent and written well, with good editing and almost zero mistakes, which is more than what I can say for most stories here. However, with all the problems above, I just continue reading as nothing in it vibes with me, especially the characters and highschool drama setting. I hope you are able to refine it to something good author. Best of wishes, I'm out.
