The story is technically good, but in the world of Solo Leveling, you have to follow around a kid in highschool, yeah... Dealing with highschool drama and relationships, as well as going to school everyday, despite having Jin Woo abilities, as well being extremely naive and revealing the system to a friend he barely met for a day, for nothing, just to heal his leg. The writing and everything else is good, just his interpretation of Hachiman is just not there and irks me, it was as if all of his trauma and nihilism before got solved after getting into a coma. If you like highschool drama things in Solo Leveling with naive MC, then this story, despite how I make it sound, is really decent and written well, with good editing and almost zero mistakes, which is more than what I can say for most stories here. However, with all the problems above, I just continue reading as nothing in it vibes with me, especially the characters and highschool drama setting. I hope you are able to refine it to something good author. Best of wishes, I'm out.

I have no words to describe it, this is simply wonderful

My man i dont even got anything to complain about so far, keep up the good work ..................................................................................

One of the best stories I've read, but there's one thing I didn't like: the hero isn't well-suited for the role. Why? Because he often feels nervous and afraid, and gets shy quickly, almost like a girl. The main character's personality doesn't develop much; only his strength increases. It would be better if he didn't feel so embarrassed all the time.

Huge potential. It's a big pain that it doesn't continue. ................................... -=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_* ................................... -=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_*^-=-_* .....................................

pld continues your update more, authyor.

Gostei bastante só tem colocar os eventos de maneira mais alinhada.(Português) É isso né mas tirando isso tá tudo de boas, os personagens de outros animes é bem interessante

I think it's a fun story, it could improve on some things and it's a bit slow because of the school context but I still think it has a lot of potential.

Buen comienzo amigo me re engancho espero que sigas adelante con la historia por que tuvo un buen comienzo espero que te vaya bien para seguir escribiendo