SandKastle
Author, did you really just write an ENTIRE CHAPTER ABOUT THIS INTERACTION?! MY GOD, THIS IS TORTURE. IT FEELS LIKE YOU ARE JUST TRYING TO MEET SOMEKIND OF WORD COUNT QUOTA ON THESE CHAPTERS. My point is there is a lot of wasted time on nonsensical situations like this, which dont have much relevence to the story. one example being the interaction between the "second string" guys trying to make a decision on who goes to get the ball?! MY GOD THAT ALONE FELT LIKE IT TOOK UP HALF THE CHAPTER. I of course know that the story has progressed far beyound this point in the plot but these are suggestions for the future. I am hooked on this novel and I like it a lot. Lastly I wish the basketball system was more useful. at this point it just feels like a liability. I mean the main character cant even improve his skills through practice without completing the weekly missions??? That is so pathetic. I have more issues with the story for now but I think this is enough for now.