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3LMI_Nana5dCommentedAuthor, did you really just write an ENTIRE CHAPTER ABOUT THIS INTERACTION?! MY GOD, THIS IS TORTURE. IT FEELS LIKE YOU ARE JUST TRYING TO MEET SOMEKIND OF WORD COUNT QUOTA ON THESE CHAPTERS. My point is there is a lot of wasted time on nonsensical situations like this, which dont have much relevence to the story. one example being the interaction between the "second string" guys trying to make a decision on who goes to get the ball?! MY GOD THAT ALONE FELT LIKE IT TOOK UP HALF THE CHAPTER. I of course know that the story has progressed far beyound this point in the plot but these are suggestions for the future. I am hooked on this novel and I like it a lot. Lastly I wish the basketball system was more useful. at this point it just feels like a liability. I mean the main character cant even improve his skills through practice without completing the weekly missions??? That is so pathetic. I have more issues with the story for now but I think this is enough for now.
Ch 38 You Are A Pervert- 3LMI_Nana6mthReplied to Reaper8726
Nice.
[You have adapted to killing.] - 3LMI_Nana9mthCommented
i like it. its unique :)
"Ye Feng, the moment I arrived at the school today, your great name was like thunder piercing the ear - genius top student, basketball expert!" - 3LMI_Nana1yrCommented
instead of "tripping" please just say hallucinating
"I hope I was not actually dreaming or tripping." Corey muttered and then fell asleep. His heart full of hope and his mind thinking he was the only one that 'Lord Ogun' granted the opportunity. - 3LMI_Nana1yrReplied to erebuss
huh? its the wrong person..
This was getting annoying. - 3LMI_Nana1yrCommented
SO CONFUSED
One had to know that their relationship was close and he was used to her taking advantage of it. - 3LMI_Nana1yrCommented
??? teacher que? wrong person...
Lu Fan was starting to get annoyed by Que Ling'er's haughty attitude. - 3LMI_Nana1yrReplied to SleepingDragons
ah.. that was a great novel
"Damned Abyss, I'll f*ck all of you to death when I am revived!detailGlobal Survival: 100 Times Cultivation Speed From The StartSci-fi · Waiting For Compliments Online - 3LMI_Nana2yrReplied to Rk6T
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This paragraph has been deleted. - 3LMI_Nana2yrCommentedCh 24 Donghuang Ziyou Gets Mind Blown!
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just stop when sufficient no need to force yourself to lengthen it, however a few more details would help making sure we have a clear picture of what's going on at all times. as if we are watching a movie maybe
So tell me.. Is somewhat short chapters okay to you guys? Or should I continue with writing Chapter having more than 1000 words? Comment down below. - 3LMI_Nana2yrCommented
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[This Is your Objective. The 3rd and the last one. This statue in front of you is the statue of the God Of God slaying] - 3LMI_Nana2yrCommented
good work author-kun
YeaY..... Another chapter... Finally regularly now. Found interest in writing again and I'll continue my form like this for a whole month maybe. Please do comment your ideas about my book, because it helps me keep on writing + Am lonely so I'll enjoy your comments at least. - 3LMI_Nana2yrCommented
don't nurf him just overpower certain people, like maybe have him fight literal gods later and have him use 1% of his strength so not to completely destroy the world once he's back to the real world. only when he fights gods. this comment is late but I can't wait till I get to the current chaps! just don't nurf him unless you absolutely have to-
So I Messed up Marcus big time and Overpowered him loL. I went a lot this time. It took me a lotta time to think about ideas to write this time and Thank god, I was able to write it today. There's a lot in this chapter, so that gives me the excuse to not write 2 chaps like promised lol. That's it for the Notes, Expecting comments. come on.