What happened to this story? It went downhill so fast. The whole Yin Chakra split is the stupidest thing I've seen in a while. It worked on Kurama because he was a beast made of Chakra and then promptly sealed. The same result for a human is nonsensical. Still, it is a good translation.
I honestly wanted greater consequences for Minato and Jiraiya but hey, there is still a chance that they will continue to oppose him, especially Jiraiya, and that it will be time to kill him xd