TalesByJaz
I really like how you're doing this story. I don't think it's dragged out. I think this gives us a nice back story of how he's going to be when he gets to school. awesome work author. or do you want to point out though you didn't mention how they got to dumbledore's office when they were going to work?
What the hay is happening? The story has a lot of holes in it. It seemed as if the author has forgotten that Harry's memories where erased at the beginning. And the parents reaction feels unrealistic if they actually care for Harry. Heard your son nearly died and all they did was thinking of forgiveness. No rage and demanding explanation for that news being kept from them. If this story is truly generated by Ai then I have to drop. Because I prefer human creativity. If not, then author please correct this mistakes. Thank you 👍