Huge fan of this work. The fight scenes are some of the best on the platform. The characters are well developed and well written, including main, supporting, side, and antagonist characters. I e really felt the loss of almost every named character even when they are only around briefly. Story is also awesome and while the full mystery driving the story isn’t unveiled yet, I am still very impressed with how well done everything has been. MC is very cool, and I’ve never had to roll my eyes at his thoughts or actions. Even when he’s made a mistake it feels authentic to him. Finally, romance well done. Love slice of life moments showing happy times, it’s very gratifying to gain moments of joy after achieving difficult victories. Only complaint is I’d like more spicy scenes - usually not something I’m looking for in a work that’s not focused on that. However, the writer is good at these scenes, they understand power dynamics well, and could lean into more extreme and kinky aspects really well. I care about the romance and the kink and intensity makes sense for the romance that has developed so very well. Strong recommend to read it!
Hello everyone and thank you for picking up my new story for your reading pleasure! This story will be a mix of romance, a lotta action, and system levelling. There will be boss fights, face slapping and complete domination! If you have any questions about the story then please don't hesitate to ask in the comment section below! I promise I don't bite... unless you want me to. P.S. I'm giving myself five stars just because. If you think I deserve it, then please leave a review!
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Awesome book. I have no idea why it's not more popular. Make sure you read the author notes 😂
A refreshing read amidst a series of disappointing ones. From writing quality to world building, everything has been good so far. Especially the Fight scenes, it's one of those novels where you can actually imagine the fight sequence as you read on. This novel is a Hidden gem.
Good. Good. Good. Good.😊 It's a harem, but doesn't seem rushed or forced. I think there are two wives and they each get their own arc, character development and backstory. I like it.
Good story. I really love fist fights so it's refreshing to see a main character that uses his fists rather than a sword or flashy magic. I'll stick with you till the story ends! Thanks for not making it a harem, I hate those.
It says completed. My favorite novel is complete. No more Pat cursing everyone out and me waiting on Queen to off a thot who even looks Mark’s way 😭😭😭
Your story is very good but unfortunately I don't have the money to continue reading it🤣...................................Why does it take 140 words to comment🐸
This was a great book. Love and hate some of the characters, but I guess that’s how good they’re written. Had a bunch of laughs throughout. Love books like that
I was honestly expecting a power drive action, romance and ascension type of stuff with overpowered tag...but it was somewhat that till around 150 chapters but when the ceo and school drama started I lost interest. Also when I read the latest chapter it was still somewhat stuck around mortal drama...it was good till it seemed like author lost his will to write. Probably will read after it gets completed... Still...good work author!
Author you have a great story, But I think you needed to expand the character more. Like the grandfather(James), Erit, Mark, and some others They needed some dev before the anima queen arc(the queen arc)
Loved the book so far! Idk how this book is so under viewed and under rated. I hope you keep writing it :)
the characters are well done and enjoyable to read so far
Okay I like it picaso mhm ..............................................,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,. . .,.,.,,..,,.
One of the best stories on this app. One of the best pieces of fiction in general.
Loved the book, though I would’ve liked a thorough look into his journey through godhood and what level of power he ended up at but we’ll see.
This is a very interesting book. A lot of suspense, action, and drama. I really enjoyed reading the book and really wished it would continue
Dont read.. its stupid novel with mumble jumble here and there. The writing its mess up and without clear explanation. The idea was good but the author clearly dont know how 5o deliver a story.
