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Comments of chapter undefined of The Spartan who became a God

The Spartan who became a God

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Mp0438
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just a suggestion but splitting up the dialogue would make this easier to read. I'm reading on my phone so that may be why but right now it just looks like a couple of long paragraphs with some dialogue in the middle of them.

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LuciferDark
LuciferDarkAuthorLuciferDark

Thank you for the suggestion if you would not mind can you show an example I would appreciate it.

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NightroPulse
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Quotation marks should always be at the beginning of the first word and end of the last word with no spaces between them. Periods come before the second quotation mark, not after.

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NightroPulse
NightroPulseLv1NightroPulse

Try not to have dialogue from more than one person in the same paragraph.

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NightroPulse
NightroPulseLv1NightroPulse

Use question marks [?] at the end of a question. Exclamation marks [!] at the end of a shout or raise of voice. Yes, you can end sentences within a dialogue. Otherwise, use a colma [,] at the end of a dialogue before adding the ending quotation mark.

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