Amazing chapter I can feel the bubbling rage frm Andrew & his dragon. Keep up the great work! If you choose to be more poetic , don’t over do it tho and lose the essence of what you trying to create. Let it flow naturally.
Sure, you can try doing so, it might help you improve your writing skills in the long run. If possible, you can also try lengthening the chapters even if it takes a week to finish, we can wait for it.